It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaurs, dodos …) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening.
Do you agree or disagree?
There are several controversial debates that conservation efforts for endangered animals are redundant, because extinction is a part of nature; however, human being has driven this rate more exponential than ever. As a result, it is a compelling responsibility for us to protect them.
Millions of years ago, it is a fact that wild species died out from a result of natural disasters, other species’ competitions, and the shortage of food supply. For instance, the dinosaurs were wiped out by meteorite or the mammoths were pushed to the edge of extinction by starving in an ice age; nevertheless, this process occurs slowly over hundreds or thousands of years until the appearance of human. The rate of loss has been rising to 100 species annually from just 10 per year. Looking closely at the courses, the wild has been poached for body parts and their habitats have been converted into farms, plants, and buildings. Moreover, alien predators are brought in, messing up food chain’s balance and pollution resulted from industrial development is also catastrophic for animal surroundings.
There is a justification for saving endangered species that each one plays a pivotal role not just in the eco-system but to our lives as well. For example, they could be the source for a new medicine against contagious plague and bear a sociocultural value, contributing to our rich bio-diversity. Also, similar to the arrival of foreign animals, food chain is disrupted if one becomes annihilated, which could drive a whole species to mass extinction.
Nowadays, the disappearance of wild animals is primarily and majorly led by our doings; thus, it is our obligation to pull out all the stops for preserving them.
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- International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? 100
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaurs, dodos …) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening.Do you agree or disagree? 100
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. 100
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18637992832 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0634071229 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648745519713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7432873565 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.545454545 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178120841162 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628184302193 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230794071103 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951166107032 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349790636435 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.