Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
The pivotal role of education is indisputably essential regarding to a person’s development; nevertheless, it is very much dependent on the methodology. There is a belief that it is enormously beneficial for kids to be educated at home while others consider that attending at school is more indispensable. In later paragraphs, each view is examined and a suggested recommendation will be showed.
A first glance at home-schooling’s merits, parents know what difficulties their children are facing, so they can customize the curriculum and select a pleasurable time regarding to extra outdoor activities in order to adjust a comfortable studying pace as well as balance both their offspring’ mental and physical health, contributing to a potential and enjoyable atmosphere in term of educational environment. Moreover, another justification in receiving private tutoring at home is to avoid school bullying issue, which is believed to be one of the primary reasons leading to childhood traumas. For actual fact, a psychologically traumatized experience is able to last until the adult stage, which is scientifically proven to be very demanding in treatment.
On the contrary, the rewarding aspects of studying at schools cannot be overlooked. First and foremost, schools simulate a mini social structure, which is of paramount importance for youngsters in the future. As a result, it teaches them how to interact with others, to survive in a society, and to stand out from the crowd, showing how precious their effort is and making them more disciplined, unlike the stress-free atmosphere and minimal discipline requirement in home coaching; thus, their overall development is far more substantial. Another plus is that traditional schooling systems provide students with specialized and cutting-edge equipment, which could push their learning experience and practicing to a whole new level.
Overall, each approach has its own perks; nonetheless, my preference would be gravitated towards traditional way, because they could develop in a better comprehensive way, especially in obtaining soft skills, such as interpersonal skills, working in group, stress management, and so forth, contributing to their real life’s sustainability in years to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
...asons leading to childhood traumas. For actual fact, a psychologically traumatized experien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, so, thus, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68035190616 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48186104724 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633431085044 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.132074125 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.090909091 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168714810796 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614397473991 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559657941306 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923099659496 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390149854629 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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