It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films, and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a view that it is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about different cultures because they can find information through books, documentaries, or the internet. However, in my opinion, direct experience through travel is very important to be able to fully feel the diverse culture there.
Admittedly, there are some rational grounds why other people reckon that they just stay at home and search for information online or through books and newspapers to clearly understand the unique culture in a certain country. One of them is that books provide us with useful information, images, and many different opinions, making us feel more objective. This is simply because currently, many information sites with many real-life videos are analyzed and studied, so even at home, we can see the scenery there with our own eyes. Another point to discuss is that finding information from books, films, and the Internet is necessary to gain knowledge about the culture of the place you want to visit. The explanation lies in the fact that when traveling, many cultures are hard to understand, so we need comments from long-time travelers or journalists so we can feel the culture of that place. Accordingly, fewer and fewer people travel because they can get a feel for the landscape or culture there.
Albeit these persuasive arguments, I stand appalled by the sentiment that it is extremely important to experience it directly by traveling because they can experience it realistically for themselves. First and foremost, traveling in person allows us to have direct contact with the people of that place and personal connections with people from different cultures. This can be explained as follows our feelings and thoughts will not be changed by online materials and each person has their assessments. For instance, many Westerners have many prejudices against African or Eastern cultures, but when we directly contact and interact with local people, we can refute those thoughts. Further and even more importantly, traveling firsthand helps us recognize the authenticity of stereotypes and prejudices about that culture from many outdated sources of information. This can be understood that exposure to diverse ways of life encourages people to understand old ideas and make their assumptions, promoting open thinking and a more accurate understanding of cultural differences. As a result, promote and encourage more people to travel to gain more knowledge about different cultures.
In conclusion, while the idea that information can be accessed online without traveling is correct, I strongly believe that direct experiences through travel are extremely important for comprehensive understanding. about many cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2308.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37995337995 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93104241047 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501165501166 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7983476887 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.764705882 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2352941176 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298917680756 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103683434273 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709413414602 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19329918506 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566065167322 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.