We humans are the most unique species on Earth due to our ability to gather and cooperate with common notions or ideas which can be grouped together and called as culture. These distinctive norms or the way things are done fascinate people which becomes a source primary attraction as to why people visit a country. With the advent of digital era, many have come to believe that you can learn about anything via books, films and the internet. And yet other have taken a stance that nothing can replace an actual visit to the place. I tend to agree with the latter. In this essay, we will explore both the viewpoints followed an opinion.
World is now more ‘connected’ than ever before. With few clicks, one can now get an immersive experience or a 3d tour of being physically present in Pyramids of Gaza. To augment this, popular digital media like Discovery and National Geographic channels broadcast shows on almost all cultures of the mankind. The primary benefit of acquiring knowledge via this medium is the amount of time and money saved by not visiting in person.
However, I would argue that going to a country reveals finer details about their cultures which often gets overlooked in print and digital media. For instance, one could not fathom the way locals feel about stacking mummies in the Pyramids. Many have read about the night life and picturesque beaches of Thailand but only when one socializes with locals of the area, one can feel the real struggle of transgender community.
In conclusion, while books and movie do offer a low cost and easily accessible source of information, the feeling of exploring a physically country is unmatched in terms of both mental satisfaction and amount of knowledge gained.
- Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on the society is negative while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people We can just learn much from books films and the Internet Do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead Discuss both views and give your opinion 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
We humans are the most unique species on Earth due to our ability to ...
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...faction and amount of knowledge gained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88474576271 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55516780369 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637288135593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0555919502 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154366006208 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448865429403 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04810974483 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744009269766 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739168474654 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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