It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Some people believe that it is now possible for scientists and the individuals to visit to remote natural environment such as South Pole or North pole. From my point of view, this notice have both benefits and drawbacks with each person and each situation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, governments can have the revolution, creative campign and attractive advertising to inprove the tourism of their country. Not only do it increase significantly their nation economy, but also the state can be transmitted the tradditional value, cutural and social knowledge to international tourists. Furthermore, the individuals can be improved their social ability, mentality and open their mind. Citizens will have more new experience and ralaxation hour after hard-working time at their academic educaton, companies or business. To illustrate, nowadays by many trip to the south pole that scientists have found a numerous of positive battery which can be useful for the individual life and the social.
On the other hand, travalling to remote natural environment will be hugely dangerous with the individuals, if there were no profestional guider and the health and safety equipment such as helmet. Moreover, with some people who do not hae conscientious or hamful habit will lead terrible influence for the atmospher and bad visualism to aboad visitor such as lifter the rubbish and do not listen to the guide of profestional people.
To conclude, by my agrument form these essay this statement have its own advantages and drawbacks appropriate with each situation, so the state need to have bright plan to impove the tourism systerm of their country and the individuals life.
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...ill analyse this statement in detail. First of all, governments can have the r...
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...ourism systerm of their country and the individuals life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28205128205 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89659064372 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.304315461 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.090909091 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198823161902 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787988514395 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125451906245 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1294821011 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112762815428 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.