It is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person’s life. How far do you agree with this view?
By augmentation of communities, the number of senior citizen increases. One of the related subjects to them is retirement, which is a polemical one. Some might describe this part of life as the best and pastime time of every person, While some to what extent disagree with that. I concur to a certain point with this issue, discussing in the continue.
On the one hand, those who are proponents of this topic declare some reasons. To begin with, almost after retiring there is no need to work, causing one does not have any responsibility, having previously. On top of that Other People do not expect of person to do work, thus the pressure on their shoulder dwindles. Moreover, one can just make more time with their spouse and family. Therefore, it seems this era is a sort of leisure time for every person.
On the other hand, there are some matters razing this time, and wreaking havoc on the older people. First and the foremost, the gravest problem that retirees confront relates to pecuniary subject. Paucity of money brings about sorts of problem from unable to go by their life to not able afford the various expenditures such as hospital, if needed, recreations, etc. Moreover, by growing older, almost most of the people come down with miscellaneous maladies, slumping their youthful ability to get around. Then, these problems engender they deprive from taking themselves avail of this era, not relishing and savoring as much as expected.
To recapitulate briefly, it seems the duration of the retirement is the most joyful time of a person’s life due to such issues as lack of responsibility to work as well as having multitude of time to spend with family. Notwithstanding, there are some subjects that make this period bitter, namely meager of money and loosing physical and mental abilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, sort of, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96078431373 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71992818153 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5705349376 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235520721606 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700186952893 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599110206223 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149234912225 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465952157451 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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