It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist.
Sports and Art may be thought of fundamentally different activities yet have some resemblance, from a participatory and spectatorial aspect. While art expresses feelings and state of mind, one can plausibly assert that sport is a form of art. (Background statement) Some believe that one needs to be naturally gifted from birth to excel in these fields, while there are instances people have performed remarkable feats through sheer dedication and discipline. (Paraphrase)This essay will discuss both views objectively , before arriving at a conclusion. (Thesis).
(Topic Statement) At an initial glance, it is quite normal to believe that some people are prodigious in certain fields right from their formative years. This has been usually observed by either parents or teachers, who skilfully dominate a particular activity in primary school competitions on a regular basis. (Reason) With adequate encouragement, these individuals can show impressive mastery in their field of choice; be it arts or sports. For instance, Sachin Tendulkar joined the National cricket team of India at a surprisingly young age of 17, and has outperformed almost everyone in this sport, adding numerous records to his collection. There is no doubt that his unquestionable talent since his childhood has made him incredibly popular, earning him the moniker, “God of Cricket ''.
On a deeper inspection, both fields are quite demanding in terms of practice. While there are numerous examples of natural talents in these areas, it definitely is not a central dogma. Ultimately success in any field depends on personal interest one has for it. Any normal human being can take up his passion and succeed eventually, provided that he rigorously trains to achieve perfection, To cite an example, star shuttle player Miss P V Sindhu, had a humble beginning, however, with perseverance and laser focused dedication she turned out to be the first indian woman to rightfully earn a silver medal in the olympics.
In conclusion, this essay has aptly emphasized that ‘practice makes perfect’ and that anyone can achieve their desired outcome, provided that they convert their dreams to reality.
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...t they convert their dreams to reality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39528023599 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94930697052 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4929709689 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.642857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24364295208 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724048654264 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548237643048 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128902800902 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511930652998 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.