It ís said that life in the modern time is now more stressful then ever before, especially for the urban dwellers. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
Thanks to the rapid development of civilization, the world has changed into a much more convenient and modern place which is beneficial for any residents. However, there is a controversial opinion whether citizens’ life nowadays seems to be more challenging and people are struggling to overcome it. In my point of view, it is true that modern life is more anxious and has more difficult problems than in the past, especially urban ones’ due to some reasons.
Firstly, inner-city people suffering more anxiety than the previous time results from the speedy evolution of technology. Scientists and technologists have invented various types of equipment, machines that automatically and precisely work for human beings. Technology is genuinely a threat to the job market. According to Global Institute, one-quarter of the workforce will lose their jobs such as: accountants, bank tellers, factory workers by the end of 2050. In order to get hired and be valuable in this AI society, workers need to boost many types of proficient knowledge and social skills or else, they will be left behind and naturally selected. It is a burden of urban people to live in such a competitive and ambitious world where technology has ultimately overpowered the labor market.
Secondly, city dwellers experienced stress and tension more than in the past because of alarming pollution rates. There is a strong connection between stress and air pollution as well as other types of polluted issues such as noise pollution, water pollution. These factors are the main reasons why employees suffer from dangerous health problems: lung cancer, heart disease and poor living environment. If luckily they do not endure this issue, people are nervous about it and take many efforts and time to adapt and prevent it.
To conclude, living in cities appears to be extreme and requires a lot of skillful features to survive in. People need to improve themselves in many aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20253164557 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82251517132 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636075949367 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4890242249 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160292872954 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452292012933 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481682656894 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841143238007 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653903924154 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.