It is said that adulterated food is key perosn behind deteriorated health of all age group masses. Hiw for you agree or disagree with it?
Food adultration is an addition of another substance to a food item in order to increase the quantity. In the current time of technological advancement. One of the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic, is that the adulterated food effect the health of all age group people? I completely agree with the statement, and shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
In there, the food adultration is also divided into three parts; intentional, unintentional, and natural food adultration. The first, and the most important type is the intentional food adultration, in under this the addition of other substance are known by the owner, worker, government, and consumer also. The extra material add such as; use of poisonous, extra additive minerals, and also use some type of colours. A good illustration here is, in sugar the chalk powder is mix which create the heart diseases, and also damage the liver.
Apart from this, the second type of food adultration is unintentional. In this the no any additional substance is mixed, the causes of international food adultration are happen like; wrong packaging of products or lack of hygienic facilities, for this cuses the taste of product is not good and also the product lose their nutritional value. According to that diarrhea,and vomiting related problems are occurred. The third and the last type of food adultration is natural, it define that natura adultration is occur naturally with the use of excessive chemical, use of excessive pesticides,and insecticide. The so many problems occur from this like; liver disorders, kidney stones, and some stomach diseases. A good examle is that the funges of wheat which we called ergot the reason of so many problem.
As we have see there are numbers os answers to this question. On balance, however, i tend to beleive that food is the basic necessitie of life. It should be pure neutrons, and free from every type of adultration. The responsibility of every farmer do not use type of bad chemical for health. Becomeork hards and earns to satisfy the one's hunger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...owner, worker, government, and consumer also. The extra material add such as; use of...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ultration is unintentional. In this the no any additional substance is mixed, the ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...s of international food adultration are happen like; wrong packaging of products or la...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...tional value. According to that diarrhea,and vomiting related problems are occurred....
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Message: Did you mean 'defines'?
Suggestion: defines
...type of food adultration is natural, it define that natura adultration is occur natura...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'occurred'.
Suggestion: occurred
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Suggestion: , and
...ve chemical, use of excessive pesticides,and insecticide. The so many problems occur...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
... which we called ergot the reason of so many problem. As we have see there are numbers os...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ergot the reason of so many problem. As we have see there are numbers os answer...
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Suggestion: seen
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, third, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06916426513 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93129050394 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564841498559 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0083608999 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5789473684 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130276943585 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383215037308 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532158220008 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901665635975 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713505393977 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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