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In this era of technology and science,individuals believe that media can affect the lifestyles of people notably. Individuals say that people should not be influenced by media because it can have negative impact on immature minds.
Media is considered as an active source of getting informations and news.people feel comfortable by believing on TV news rather than of social media as it can be fake after all.But overrelying on TV news can have harmful effects on psychological health of individuals.it have ability to change the lifestyles of youth.adolescents can get impressed by different kinds of ads broadcast on news channels like fashion ads and luxury diets which simultaneously economical families can not afford
The over hyped news may agitate the students and can be disaster for them.
There are also some positive aspects of news channel which can not be denied.
It gives you information about all the incidents happening on state level or globally.it broadcasts all the incidents instantly and describe everything about everything instantly.
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| 2022-11-23 | Mubaidullah | 11 | view |
| 2021-11-27 | sangeeth28 | 78 | view |
| 2021-08-03 | Jai Punjabi | 58 | view |
| 2021-02-17 | Charlotte_Giang_VN | 56 | view |
| 2020-10-22 | samuel gill | 67 | view |
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- Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given speacial courses Discuss those views 56
- More and more people relying on private car as their major means of transportation Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 56
- More and more people relying on private car as their major means of transportation Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 78
- The popularity of news media often has been significantly influential in people s lives Some people believe this to be a negative development To what extent do you agree or disagree with their opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , individuals
In this era of technology and science,individuals believe that media can affect the lifes...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ocial media as it can be fake after all.But overrelying on TV news can have harmful...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... psychological health of individuals.it have ability to change the lifestyles of you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4156626506 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27277020614 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656626506024 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.903731305 49.4020404114 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.8 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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