It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or danage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not?
Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
Some people argue that, we should not borrow money from a friend because it can harm or damage the friendship. While others think that there is no problem in lending money from a friend untill unless we return it on time. I personally feel that taking money from a friend in not an issue. This can be justified by following reasons and examples.
To embark with, the first and foremost reason is that friends have an obligation each others on difficult situations. As we all know, the financial problem has always existed and sometimes we cannot solve them lonely. In this way, we can appreciate more our friendship when our friends help us to cope with it. Infact, when a friend borrow money to us, we have more enthusiasm to keep our relationship. Moreover, it can strengthen the relationships. In addition, I believe that when friends lend and borrow money from each other it means that they trust each other
On the other side, some people might cite that borrowing money can hurt the relationship. With this two friends lose their confidence in each other. Also, borrowing money might convert the relationships into an ordinary one. We might lose our friends when they ask something and we cannot afford it.
In conclusion, all above evidence supports this undeniable fact that borrowing money from best friends can never damage our friendship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58108943749 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3218016072 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222079605961 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919452122488 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551706246109 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164624465915 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517504968931 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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