Some people think that spending a lot of money on holding wedding parties ,birthday parties and other celebration is just a waste of money.others ,however,thinks that these are necessary for individuals and society.discuss both views and give your opinion

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With the rise in modernization,the life style of people have been greatly ...
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...yle of people have been greatly affected,they have achieved various milestones.Howeve...
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...d,they have achieved various milestones.However,aome issues remain unchallenged and com...
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...;one such controversial issue here is of,should spending money by people on some events...
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...by people on some events is good or not?i shall explore the principles of this to...
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...p my opinion at the end. To embark with,people who think that spending money on events...
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...they claim their view point by said that,people can utilized their money on wedding,bir...
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...ople can utilized their money on wedding,birthday and other occasional events only to sho...
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...tus between their friends and relatives.Moreover,they waste their income on unusual thin...
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...een their friends and relatives.Moreover,they waste their income on unusual things;li...
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...ncome on unusual things;like-decorations,lighting,sound system,hiring workers and land on...
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...s;like-decorations,lighting,sound system,hiring workers and land on rent etc.The survey...
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...tem,hiring workers and land on rent etc.The survey conducted by the hindustan times...
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...l products rather than on social welfare,starvation. On the other side,there are other gro...
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...l welfare,starvation. On the other side,there are other group of people who thinks th...
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...ion. On the other side,there are other group of people who thinks that using money o...
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...ing money on events is necessary for all,they convincing their view point by claiming...
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...incing their view point by claiming that,special events like marriages,birthday events a...
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...iming that,special events like marriages,birthday events and other celebrational moments ...
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...rational moments happening few times in life time in which peole make gatherings,make new...
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...life time in which peole make gatherings,make new friends,improve their bondings etc....
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...h peole make gatherings,make new friends,improve their bondings etc.Furthermore,people c...
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... new friends,improve their bondings etc.Furthermore,people can show their status and standa...
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...s,improve their bondings etc.Furthermore,people can show their status and standard of l...
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...y doing this and also wedding ceremonies can occur only once in life,so it is bei...
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... ceremonies can occur only once in life,so it is being important for individuals f...
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...ndividuals for celebrating. To conclude,both view points have their own thinking,i t...
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...both view points have their own thinking,i tend to believe that,people can spend t...
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...oth view points have their own thinking,i tend to believe that,people can spend t...
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...heir own thinking,i tend to believe that,people can spend their money wisely on such ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60431654676 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.05696714977 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.884706283 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 389.5 106.682146367 365% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.5 20.7667163134 335% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235108559252 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145791831096 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374451639825 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145791831096 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374451639825 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.7 13.0946893788 303% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.38 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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