Some people think that spending a lot of money on holding wedding parties ,birthday parties and other celebration is just a waste of money.others ,however,thinks that these are necessary for individuals and society.discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the rise in modernization,the life style of people have been greatly affected,they have achieved various milestones.However,aome issues remain unchallenged and complex as ever;one such controversial issue here is of,should spending money by people on some events is good or not?i shall explore the principles of this topic with various assertions and reasons and shape up my opinion at the end.
To embark with,people who think that spending money on events is just a waste of money and they claim their view point by said that,people can utilized their money on wedding,birthday and other occasional events only to showoff their status between their friends and relatives.Moreover,they waste their income on unusual things;like-decorations,lighting,sound system,hiring workers and land on rent etc.The survey conducted by the hindustan times and they claim that 78 percentum people of the worldwide can waste their money on unusual products rather than on social welfare,starvation.
On the other side,there are other group of people who thinks that using money on events is necessary for all,they convincing their view point by claiming that,special events like marriages,birthday events and other celebrational moments happening few times in life time in which peole make gatherings,make new friends,improve their bondings etc.Furthermore,people can show their status and standard of living by doing this and also wedding ceremonies can occur only once in life,so it is being important for individuals for celebrating.
To conclude,both view points have their own thinking,i tend to believe that,people can spend their money wisely on such events and give their small amount of money to NGO for making their moments special and memorable.if they should do this also starvation level will be decrease with the passge of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60431654676 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.05696714977 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.884706283 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 389.5 106.682146367 365% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.5 20.7667163134 335% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235108559252 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145791831096 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374451639825 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145791831096 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374451639825 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.7 13.0946893788 303% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.38 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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