It is sometimes said that the countryside offers a high level of life, especially for families. What are the arguments for and against families choosing to live and work in the countryside, for example as farmers? What is your own view about this?
Some believe that settling as a family in rural areas to work and live improves the quality of life. However, there are a few arguments against the view as we will discuss in the following bodies.
On the one hand, countryside is believed to be backwater with fewer public amenities than city in the form of sport complexes, leisure and market places. Especially, as village depopulation leaves the country dwellers, settled families might become isolated. Added to this is the scarcity of colleges and schools, meaning children may need to travel for long distances for education. Finally, for both children and parents career options are limited, which probably leads to rural unemployment or poverty in the worst cases.
Conversely, life in rural territories offers rewards which go beyond material consideration. Living in a comparatively simple life with the abundance of resources, wildlife forestry and water bodies can be a primary example of this. Lots of locals in the areas live at least at a subsistence level through being self-sufficient smallholders and stay away from the influence of the wider economy, which afflicts city dwellers. Lastly, as technology enables children to undertake distance learning and remote viewing, they should be less isolated from current life.
All in all, it is admitable that living in countryside might have few number of facilities to live on high standards of life. Nevertheless, there are certain advantages of the life in villages such as self-sufficiency, resources and environmental awareness which can probably exceed the expectations of settlers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...e that living in countryside might have few number of facilities to live on high standards...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, so, well, as to, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37698412698 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02959233317 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6020173407 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.916666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230737713668 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731272829725 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453975812124 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128000658308 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349845924224 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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