It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people think that a city has great facilities to live in, whereas others argue that a countryside provides a better life. I believe that a life in the countryside offers more.
On the one hand, one of the most significant positive thing of living in the countryside is having better air quality that makes the countryside the best place to live in, because air is the main source for people. In other words, as there are less populated and polluted in the countryside, there are less vehicles on road which means that in the countryside harmful gases like carbon di-oxide are less released than in the city. It makes people more healthy. Moreover, huge views of greeneries can make people happy and help people to release stress and also, people can use greeneries as natural medicines. For example, if a person know about plants which are effective for illnesses, he may cure sick villagers. This method has long been more effective in healing than chemicals.
On the other hand, because of the most companies settle down in cities, a demand for human workforce is high which means that there are more opportunities for people in various job positions. Thus, each person can find an appropriate one. However, I ensure that people prefer to stay in countryside, because a good health should be principal, whereas there are more enormous job offers in the city.
In conclusion, although people who are on city side have different job positions, I agree that countryside is the best place to live because of the healthy environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vehicles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89694656489 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63070148286 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545801526718 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4299153922 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.916666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166909175945 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068370828347 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954587698215 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142647315417 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127036369273 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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