It is true to say that in the new millennium and due to the consumerism culture, some citizens borrow money in order to purchase various products and facilities which do not use and cost an arm and a leg sometimes.
It is true to say that in the new millennium and due to the consumerism culture, some citizens borrow money in order to purchase various products and facilities which do not use and cost an arm and a leg sometimes. There is possibly a multitude of reasons for this trend and a number of tactics should be taken into account to address it effectively.
Incontrovertibly, all the people, irrespective of their age and gender, want to lead a happy lifestyle. Consequently, they are willing to buy new facilities to fulfill this need. Due to the consumerism culture and advertisement pressure creating excessive needs to go for their goods, people tend to buy unnecessary products. Another reason for this sweeping trend is making a comparison between ourselves and affluent members in terms of our belongings. As a case in point, according to the statistics around 75% of women compare their life with their colleagues and friends. This devastating comparison may contribute to buy excessively to show off.
However, there are a number of actions which can be taken into account to ameliorate this problem. The first and foremost measure is learning financial management in order to avoid buy impulsively. This can be obtained by reading books in this regard. Another beneficial solution is avoiding to compare wealthier people with ourselves. It is of paramount importance to concentrate on our objectives rather than these childish things. Consequently, in the long-run, this trend will be stopped as a result of implementing these policies.
To sum up, consumerism culture and faulty comparison could be condemned for buying aimlessly, however, by assimilating financial management and not making a comparison this issue could be solved effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26785714286 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13332767947 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1963296616 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224055887728 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807452487881 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.246712883567 0.0667982634062 369% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188328824936 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.277629390606 0.056905535591 488% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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