Jobs
In recent years, searching for suitable careers has been receiving a great deal of public attention. While many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered, I would also believe that a convenient working atmosphere should should not be discouraged.
There are several reasons why employees looking for a well-paid job. First, the high income would helps people cover their daily expenses such as food, househole furniture or water and electricity bills. For example, if an employees had a high salary, they and their family could have a good standard of living and the life became more and more comfortable. In my opinion, if people choose a job with a low salary, it is difficult to support themselves and their families. Second, companies that offer a high salary usually requires candiates who have more motivation to work. Because when people know that they have been paid adequately to their efforts, they are wiiling to work harder and more enthusiastical. As a result, they could share higher productivity and contribute more to the development of companies.
On the other hand, I believe that the atmosphere in workplace are extremely important to achieve highest efficiency in work. Firstly, since people spend most of their time at their workplace, a satisfying working atmosphere helps them reduce stress and pressure or they can perform better at the workplace. That results from the fact that they can easily develop their sense of creativity in working on any project. Moreover, having a good manager and friendly colleagues helping people to discuss and conclude any problems easily. This mean that the relationships with other around them would be enhanced, leading to to the growth of employment efficiency and company sales. And from my perspective, when they choose a poor environment, they might be faced to many conflicts and arguments within the company.
In conclusion, while the salary should be only one consideration in choosing a job, I believe that other factor like work environment are equally important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: should
...ve that a convenient working atmosphere should should not be discouraged. There are several ...
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Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...-paid job. First, the high income would helps people cover their daily expenses such ...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an employee' or simply 'employees'?
Suggestion: an employee; employees
... and electricity bills. For example, if an employees had a high salary, they and their famil...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'achieve the highest'.
Suggestion: achieve the highest
...in workplace are extremely important to achieve highest efficiency in work. Firstly, since peop...
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Line 3, column 615, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... around them would be enhanced, leading to to the growth of employment efficiency and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17065868263 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77165473892 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577844311377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0751641803 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117860543159 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480392875865 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849730202535 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100288310199 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622479835461 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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