The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the few past years, humans are destroying the environment for various purposes. Therefore, government enforces law to protect environment because environmental issues are in hazard. Some people think, nowadays, masses live uncomfortable lives then this becomes beneficial for further generation. I completely disagree with the statement and shed some light regarding this notion in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are plethora of problems regards to environmental issues that by man themselves. The major problem is pollution. In modern era, everyone want to live luxury life due to which they buy number of cars to show their financial status. Individuals should not use more vehicles because greenhouse gas is increasing rapidly and this is harmful for environment. For instance, in Tesla, government starts electronic cars in 2021. These cars are more convenient and comfortable rather than other.
Moreover, the usage of plastic bags are increased day to day. Authority should try to do something regard this problem because neither these bags are decomposed in soil nor we burn these bags. If we burn these bags therefore this shows bad effect on environment. For instance, in India, authority ban plastic bags and prefer to use clothes or jute bags. Furthermore, masses also use wood in numerous count to establish their luxurious homes and this not good for ecology. Because the proportion of oxygen is decreased rapidly and carbon dioxide is on incline. People should plant more trees amd decrease the use of wood and paper.
To conclude, I personally consider that to avoid the usage of paper and tape double side print outs as well as all the world need to use technology likewise Tesla and use less items which command on petrol. I opine, individuals change the way of lifestyle that they live despite to live uncomfortable life for further generation.
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 61
- Today more and more full time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities 73
- Having a lot of international sports events may promote world peace To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- By punishing murderers with the death penalty society is also guilty of committing murder Therefore life in prison is a better punishment for murderers To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement 74
- Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...umans are destroying the environment for various purposes. Therefore, government ...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun items is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...o use technology likewise Tesla and use less items which command on petrol. I opine,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23762376238 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80006115113 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2586889004 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5263157895 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171764396775 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499757540131 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396225651198 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10885769414 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330161507852 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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