Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think it has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In many parts of the world, there have been a growing number of population who are concerned about sports. It is generally believed that big activities related to sports are an opportunity for business. This essay attempts to prove that viewpoint is justifiable for certain reasons.
It is argued that giant corporations can do marketing their products in sport matches.
The underlying reason is that the competitions are directly followed by numerous audiences in the world resulting in the best way for business. For instance, these sponsors in EURO 2020, their products are put with athletes, when answering interviews, as well as be promoted that are not paid any media fees. From my perspective, this viewpoint is justifiable because this is beneficial for both companies and sports organizations. To illustrate, large companies can do widespreadly marketing to the worldwide customers while organizations receive a part of the profits from these sponsors minimising some financial problems.
From my perspective, I would say that promoting products of giant corporations has a significantly positive effect on sports events. It is understandable due to the fact that these companies can advertise sport activities in the world by their purchase networks and event organizations are able to save money for advertisement. As an illustration, TV stations also have profit from the advertisement when corporations want to appear in big sport programs. Additionally, players in sport can have the contracts from these sponsors resulting in help participants find it effortlessly to increase self-income. For example, football players who own the contracts of sport corporations from market products related with sport items, such as Adidas, Nike, have a better life.
From the foregoing discussion, I believe that the promotion of the company is a valuable opportunity for sport operations resulting in benefits for both sides about advertisement of products, and reducing financial challenges. As a result, this saved the advertisement cost and supported athletes to get higher income from the commercial contracts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56307692308 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24261564374 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541538461538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8460524408 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207632961042 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768807293506 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587347905012 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129123862767 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645845836026 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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