Large company use sports events to promote their products. Some people think it has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Big enterprises use sporting events to advertise their products. However, some people argue that this may take its toll on sports. Personally, I totally disagree with this opinion.
Athletic events, especially international ones, often attract millions of attendance worldwide, not to mention a large number of people paying attention on television and social media. As a result, big businesses see these events as potential occasions to boost their products when sporting itself takes advantages of budget from commercial contracts.
For example, on EURO 2020, Nike and Adidas-two large sportswear companies provided several national football teams with their brand’s shoes and clothes which required a budget of millions of dollars. Footballers got high-quality sportswear which could put them in the best state in the competition. In return, these two brands then received a huge profit from consumers watching this competition which was much bigger in comparison with their investment. This is obviously a win-win situation.
On a larger scale, when sports events receive investment from big businesses, the revenue then may in turn be used in improving the facilities and training which helps promote athletes’ performance. Besides, sportsmen stand a chance of earning a lot of money from endorsements and pursuing their interest at the same time. Money can also be used to reward athletes if they did well in the competition.
Some people may question about the core value of sports when advertising appears everywhere on sporting events. However, it is believed that company investment can help enhance the quality of current sports as well as raise the passion for sport of sportsmen.
In conclusion, sporting business does not deserve criticism as it causes no harm to sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...of attendance worldwide, not to mention a large number of people paying attention on television a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52036199095 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91911671552 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1312571304 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205502212786 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692409780431 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660007217052 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127037884649 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565340268607 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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