In the last 20 years, there have been significant development in the field of information technology(IT), for example World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in future.
To what extent do you agree with this view? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own experience.
In contemporary era, technology is advancing at a faster pace. The last two decades have many advances in IT and people's life is effected by this enormous change. However, while these advancement have bought many benefits to the world, yet I strongly believe that there are numerous negative impacts than positive.
To begin with, email has made communication easier and faster especially abroad, resulting wide range of benefits for commerce and business. Furthermore, the World Wide Web means information is available anywhere and at anytime. For instance, people can excess news,medical advice, online education courses and much more by internet. It is evident that these improvements made life much easier and more convenient for large number of people and will continue to do so for decades to come.
Nevertheless, the effect of this new technology is not all beneficial. For example, many people feel that the widespread use of email is destroying the traditional forms of communication such as letter writing, telephonic and face to face conversation. This could result in the decline of people's basic ability to socialize and interact with each other on a day to day basis.
In addition, due to large size of web, it is difficult to regulate and control. As children get access to unsuitable video, websites and v which have harmful effect on them. Unfortunately, this condition can get worse in the future until more regulated systems setup.
To recapitulate the points, even though development of IT have many benefits, yet I believe these advances are more likely to have many negative effects in the future on society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advancement' or 'these advancements'?
Suggestion: this advancement; these advancements
...by this enormous change. However, while these advancement have bought many benefits to the world,...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , medical
...me. For instance, people can excess news,medical advice, online education courses and mu...
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Line 13, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cess to unsuitable video, websites and v which have harmful effect on them. Unfor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23018867925 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89034434344 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8255933226 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299950316936 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879519964553 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064226012336 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15062966813 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682197834625 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.