Laws should not be rigid or fixed Instead they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and place of the offence To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer

There is no doubt that the laws are essential for the well-being of the society as these helps in maintaining the balance among the various society members. Furthermore, in the situation of anarchy everything seems to be unbalanced and the situation can be made placid with the help of laws only. However, there is an ongoing debate that laws should not be adamant and need to be changed according to different situations. I strongly agree with this viewpoint because laws are made for the development of society and these need to be adjusted according to the different situations perceived for the actual progress.
The requirements of the people undergo change with time. To elucidate, with the progress of science and technology, the thinking level of the people changes and their life become more comfortable. So, there is need to change law which will help to take the best advantage of these developments. To exemplify, in this contemporary era with the incoming of different online technologies and facility of online education, laws should be made regarding incorporating online education in schools and colleges, as a consequence of which many students who are not able to commute to far off places can take its advantage. Moreover, it helps some poor students to complete their studies along with their work. Thus, laws formed should be changed according to the change in time and technology.
Moving further, laws are made according to the present circumstances and the situation. So, when such situations undergo a change laws should necessary undergo a change for the betterment of the society. For instance, during the situation of COVID pandemic, 2020, government of many countries imposed a complete shutdown prevailing to the situation of emergency, but these restrictions were slowly released with the decrease in the number of cases. If this doesn’t happen then many people may lose their life and if the restrictions were not relieved then it may results in paucity of food among various people and death from poverty. Thus, laws should be amended according to the present circumstances not only for the development of society but to maintain the good health of the individuals.
Perhaps, the overriding reason for my belief is that laws need to be implemented according to a given place. A change in place also needs a change in law according to the demand. Some places need more protection among others in relation to law and disorder, environment protection and likewise. For example, with the degradation in environment of Delhi due to excessive pollution caused by the lifestyle of the human beings, government has imposed various laws like even odd law for transport usage and many others to control the high level of pollution and safeguard the people. These laws have no relevance in other parts of the country where the population is below the marked level. Hence, laws must also be subject to change in place.
For all these reasons, I believe that laws need to be flexible and should be made according to the place, situation and circumstances. The change in laws is not made at a click of finger as it will diminish the importance of laws. There is need to have a protocol to adjust the laws as the situation prevails and every member of the society need to obey these laws strictly.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the laws as the situation prevails and every member of the society need to obey...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 41.998997996 210% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 29.0 8.3376753507 348% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2769.0 1615.20841683 171% => OK
No of words: 555.0 315.596192385 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98918918919 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79753390072 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436036036036 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 873.0 506.74238477 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2453221619 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70833333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246217076644 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897191236391 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068646800132 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161777616877 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297385900213 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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