To learn a language you have to learn the culture and lifestyle of the country in which specified language is spoken Do you agree or disagree

Now days whole world are very advance.the language show tha person persnality.some people believe that a person to learn language we have to leran our culture and lifestyle.I discuss the mixed view in upcoming paragraphs

On having a primary pre-dominant implication in the favour of many way of learning language.moreover we can learn language with study as well as electric assesries for instance In india mostly youngsters study ielts for learning english language and people learn language with mobile.we can learn language any time any where Further people learn language in school from thier childhood.we can learn language with see the globaligation As well as fron thier parents while we can learn diffrent languages with tha help of tv

On the other hand,people can learn the launguage fron thier culture and life style becouse people learn that language which they learn from their old parents like grandfather and grandmother further mostly youngster learn language from historical places like miuseam and temples for example in india almost all people learn thier temple like punjabi learn thier language from gurugrath sahib becouse it is his history moreover we can learn many language go other countries and learn diffrent languages

In a nuttshell,the people have a diffrent chooses like some people intersted with learning cuture language and some have learn other way of languge

Votes
Average: 6.1 (11 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...have to leran our culture and lifestyle.I discuss the mixed view in upcoming para...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun way seems to be countable; consider using: 'many ways'.
Suggestion: many ways
...e-dominant implication in the favour of many way of learning language.moreover we can le...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: ANY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...h mobile.we can learn language any time any where Further people learn language in school...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...with tha help of tv On the other hand,people can learn the launguage fron thier cult...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...arn diffrent languages In a nuttshell,the people have a diffrent chooses like som...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...hell,the people have a diffrent chooses like some people intersted with learning cut...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... learning cuture language and some have learn other way of languge
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36199095023 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73495632091 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511312217195 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 221.0 20.2975951904 1089% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1185.0 106.682146367 1111% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 221.0 20.7667163134 1064% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 87.0 7.06120827912 1232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370789612628 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.370789612628 0.084324248473 440% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250065583452 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607767882834 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 114.3 13.0946893788 873% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -152.84 50.2224549098 -304% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 89.5 11.3001002004 792% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.29 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.96 8.58950901804 209% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 90.4 10.1190380762 893% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 90.0 10.7795591182 835% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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