Many childrean these day have their own mobile phones. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ile.many children have thier own mobile.I discuss my advantage or disadvantege in...
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...e or disadvantege in upcoming paragraphs On having a ptimary pri-dominant implica...
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...f importance of mobile in children life.Moreover children gain knowladge about whole wor...
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...f importance of mobile in children life.Moreover children gain knowladge about whole wor...
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...cell phone and get information any time any where.Further children talk with thier famaly...
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... and get information any time any where.Further children talk with thier famaly then th...
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...l phone then they learn thier life style On the other hand,the mobile is not good...
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...n thier life style On the other hand,the mobile is not good for children becouse...
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...rong video as well as see wrong picture.Further they ignore and ingure thier health for...
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...ed thier all time in using mobile phones and not play outdoor game with which wea...
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...ng cell phone and forget famaly bounding In a nutshell,the children to should use...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15948275862 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66095639047 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 232.0 20.2975951904 1143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1197.0 106.682146367 1122% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 232.0 20.7667163134 1117% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 87.0 7.06120827912 1232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100304724608 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100304724608 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850338150409 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734759117306 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 118.9 13.0946893788 908% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -164.0 50.2224549098 -327% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 93.8 11.3001002004 830% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.13 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.61 8.58950901804 217% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 94.8 10.1190380762 937% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 95.0 10.7795591182 881% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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