Life was better when technology was simpler.
To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Our old life was ecstatic before involving high technology in most of our life-affairs. I believe that the advanced technology made our lifer easier than before such as internet and mobile phones. In this essay I will discuss how the high technology positively affect our lifestyle specially in healthcare sector and different economics branches.
Firstly, communications are the economic back bone. Whereas, the huge portion of the financial transactions was relied on the internet. Moreover, most of stock markets have an online website which allows any person to buy and sell using mobile phones beside, online money transfer and how easy comparing with the non-technology ages. For example, as published soon that the online retail market size in China reached to 168 billion dollar in 2018 third quarter.
Secondly, the impact of advanced tech is valuable at healthcare sector. In other words, artificial intelegence helps physician to take the right decision. Whereas, AI technology helps patients it decreases the common risks by early alerting for any abnormal vital signs. For example, AI can diagnosis most of patient’s MRI images for patients who have cancer. Additionally, AI will save 150 billion dollars yearly by 2026 for healthcare budget and it will help doctors to prescribe the right drugs based on the gonomic research using AI alogrithms as reported by Accenture.
To conclude, the life will not be easy without using technology to facilitate our needs. I believe that the technology has a vital role in our life and we will not feel comfortable without it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, whereas, for example, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30708661417 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82020875241 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629921259843 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7485035664 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112883288025 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424125328872 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544246081324 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745439205118 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453814780051 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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