Light corporal punishment is being reintroduced in school of uk. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it? Discuss.
It is said that " the light corporal punishment is permitted to schools only for teaching the decorm to students of the school". For instance, the given topic asserts that should light corporal punishment is reintroduced in uk schools or not? In this essay, I am going to examine the question from both points of view.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the advantages of light corporal punishment in school are good. The main reason for believing that is that to set afraid on the mind of students. It also possible to say that the students set the pridiction in our mind that should learn despline or do the work at right time is compulsory in the school beacuse if they, do not done their work the punishment given by the teacher. It also helps the teacher to controlling the all class. As well as, the teacher give punishment beacuse the students can learn new good things, and also maintain despline. Moreover, if the children take the punishment they sure about next time done their work efficiently. The good illustration of that is here, the survey was conducted by a university of uk the conclusion of that survey the most 70% of students which gey good jobs and placed at multinational companies that was learned with the help of light corporal punishment.
On the opposite side, the people who argue that the light corporal punishment is not good. The mostly children are frustrated from their study reason behind this the light corporal punishment. Apart from this, if the children are frustrated fron their study so they cannot attend the school and mostly are left the schools. As well as, it is a first stage of dipression. Moving ahead, some children leave the school and also some children commit the suicide. So that's why is not effective solution to teach the decorm to the students. A goid example is here, the university of California make the report and find that the 60% of students in year 2005 leave the schools because of the light corporal punishment in the schools.
As we have seen that, there are bunbers of answers of this question. On the balance, however, I tend to believe that the government do not use the light corporal punishment in the schools. On the other hand schools conduct the seminar or concselling the students to maintain despline and positive response for their study, and do hard work to acheive the goals of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...so some children commit the suicide. So thats why is not effective solution to teach ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75417661098 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56255240551 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44630071599 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5917934591 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278200813346 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901414276872 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101189117289 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187031363417 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739272616379 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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