Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Migrating to a new home can be a challenge, especially when one does not speak the local language. While this communication barrier may present some immigrants with difficulties in assimilating into their new culture, I do not agree this is necessarily true for all newcomers, notably those who move to the big cities.
Most of the today’s major cities are multicultural hubs where a variety of languages are spoken. This means that a person newly arrived in one of these metropolises can likely find members of his culture with whom to interact while adapting to his new life. In other words, this person should find it relatively easy to take care of practical matters like shopping, opening a bank account, getting medical services, and so on. Moreover, many of these immigrant communities have centers to facilitate social interactions, meaning newcomers can build a social network, conduct business, and even find romantic partners, all while using their native tongue as they learn the new language.
On the other hand, those who move to less cosmopolitan areas surely have more problems, both social and practical. Without being able to communicate with neighbors, store clerks, or even with doctors, these immigrants can find each day a struggle to survive. Making things worse is the fact that they may end up friendless and even experience abuse by the locals with whom they cannot engage. Thus, not only will a person feel lonely, but he or she may be viewed by the local inhabitants as a stranger not to be trusted. In the long term, this harms not only the individual, but the social harmony as a whole.
To conclude, migrants who move to areas where their compatriots live in numbers generally do not have a difficult time adjusting to their new home. The problems of integration thus apply mainly to those who move to more rural and remote areas where language barriers can be a serious issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92569659443 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70603820991 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603715170279 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.49591189 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190049217049 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637773293275 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344620157424 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114588632867 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283589653877 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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