Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is widely believed that living in a country where the official language is different form yours would cause many troubles, in both social and pratical area. As for me, I agree with it and I think those difficulties are not easily to avoid.
When we enter a new environment, the main and the most inportant thing for us is to establish a social net with local people, but it is difficult for most of us. The unique culture always lead to unique speaking style and we need time to adapt to it. However, during this process, we are worried about if we have said anything unsuitable and sometimes we may be hurt by others' words though they are not mention to it. For example, a student may get some wrong messages such as the dissatisfition from his tutor because of the words that his tutor uses are too strict but normal in the local culture.
There are also some practical troubles we may face after moving to a new country with different language. First of all, the students may feel nervous when there is a presentation or assignment that they usually can not get a good grade for the low rate of vocabulary and the lack of confidence. Then it also occurs when we are hunting a job, the native speakers are normally the better choice for companies that don't willing to spend time and money on forst their employees' communication skills. At last, common life is also influenced by language, there can be more problems than we have thought when go to supermarket or hospital.
In conclusion, I think the problems an unfamiliar language can bring us is in a large amount.
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- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ly the better choice for companies that dont willing to spend time and money on fors...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, as for, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57042253521 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55969205336 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0633455421 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148439297259 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587948609407 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487602300649 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105960189041 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467818243565 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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