These days, the world has become a global village where multiple linguistic people of different cultural background live together but there are a significant number of people who believe that, to cope up with a foreign language and work not always easy. In my opine, I strongly believe that language is a barrier and can lead to a serious social problem in a foreign country. In the following essay, I will support my opinion with examples.
First of all, it's really difficult to find out people with similar interest and habits. Moreover, we need to start from scratch to find out a place in the community which is not an overnight job. Take elderly people as an example, it's just next to impossible for them to forget their own culture and tradition, and adopt a new culture at a very old age. there are many people who are not ready to accept foreign customs and cultures so they escape from communicating with anyone in the neighborhood.
The second problem is language discrimination, there are a huge amount of people who had suffered various types of discrimination before finding a place in the workplace. For example, a good number of Indian has been tortured and killed in Australia just because their mother tongue is not English. this leads to the feeling of insecurity in a foreign land.
Last but not least, people are not able to create natural bonding because others do not speak their home language and they always have a feeling of homesickness that results in isolation from the community.
As far as I am concerned, I personally believe that social and work-life in a foreign country is always troublesome in terms of making a connection with neighbors or finding a position in the workplace due to the language barrier. In some cases, it could result in life long regret.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, for example, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79742765273 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69806152357 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7198146356 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170490567702 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555748411308 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734036114797 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092142937781 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596895916403 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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