We live in an age where migrating to and from a country is relatively easy. People move for a variety of reasons, from trying to land a new job, to seeking asylum, or it could be just to experience a better quality of life. Moving abroad makes individuals learn a new language and it can be a challenge. Some people point out that living abroad can cause social and physical problems, since they must communicate in a foreign language. Although, we may face problems initially, I strongly disagree with the idea and in this essay, I will support my views with examples.
There are several reasons I disagree with the notion. Firstly, having frequent exposure to a foreign language enables us to learn it easier, and as a result people face less problems communicating. English is a global language, most people can understand the basics, and physical problems can be eliminated with the use of hand gestures. Because of it, it reduces psychological issues. Moreover, those speaking 2 or more languages are probable to get employed. Social services are likely to hire bilingual or polyglots.
On the other hand, there are those who assert that people are likely to face social or physical problems when having to speak a foreign language. They feel that suicide rates are high towards second-language speakers, which is caused by discrimination from native people. Also, people are prone to psychological problems because of their inability to communicate. By contrast, people can join clubs with other second-language speakers. This makes it easy for them to get friends and decrease the feeling of loneliness.
In conclusion, from my point of view, people can learn to overcome social and physical problems while living in abroad. People will learn to adapt and interact with others in the new environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85710615056 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1773244443 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207530809507 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653813588707 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447722494038 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130449022821 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040317859187 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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