Mastering a foreign language has always been one of the toughest challenges of those who intend to live or study in a different country. There has been a common knowledge that language barriers could bring tremendous problems to non-native speakers. While I agree with this idea, I also take the viewpoint that it would be significantly beneficial if a person can master the language skills.
On the one hand, many people have to struggle with numerous problems relating to language competence when trying to settle down in a new land. For example, a Vietnamese student starting studying in England may find it extremely challenging to communicate with native inhabitants or classmates coming from various countries in the world. Moreover, understanding lessons and lectures in academic and specific English can drive he or she to many difficulties or even depression.
On the other hand, the benefits brought by proficient language skills are enormous. Firstly, a person with fluent language skills are able to adapt to the new environment more quickly and are more likely to get along with new local residents. Secondly, people could stand a chance of learning new interesting cultures and local traditions which may be extremely essential for their studies as well as their living experiences. Therefore, it is crucially important that those planning to inhabit or study in a foreign country should prepare their language skills in advance.
In conclusion, people may cope with a number of issues if they lack of foreign language knowledge and skills such as misunderstanding or studying difficulties. However, it would be noticeably advantageous for those who are able to manage the language competence.
- Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 85
- Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion 87
- Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 90
- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'communicating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: communicating
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31985294118 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99595811557 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0927962956 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166870755328 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624982883048 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289442545669 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101512558843 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241419907691 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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