Many people starting to reside in a new country are often advised to adapt themselves to the local customs and traditions. I completely agree with this opinion.
On the one hand, you can disappoint the local residents or even make them angry if you do not obey their living customs or traditions. Furthermore, foreigners can unconsciously commit criminal actions, which are considered to be legal in their countries, leading to tremendous problems. For instance, you are not allowed to wear shorts or miniskirts when travelling to some royal places in Thailand. Even worse, illegality can be attributed to an inappropriate action or attitude towards the Thai king or the royal family members. Similarly, Japanese might be upset when you enter their traditional houses without removing your shoes.
Nevertheless, following local customs and traditions enables you to adapt to the new living environment more quickly, and you can make new friends more easily. You may also learn many new stimulating things from the local culture, which enhance your knowledge and experience about life. For example, if you want to start a business in an alienating country, a broad knowledge about the way people live or their habits will be enormous advantages what help you increase your trading profit. Also, foreign students immersing themselves in the local culture quickly can overcome culture-shock or any cultural differences.
In conclusion, I would argue that the local customs and traditions are extremely crucial for a person to follow if he or she wants to integrate fully into the new society.
- Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this op 67
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 73
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns? 84
- Some people think teachers have a greater influence than parents in the development of a child s intelligence and social skills Do you agree or disagree 93
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27843137255 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87535765791 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61568627451 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6547215745 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302230298234 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983008333279 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786653777555 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171693768383 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522597066584 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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