Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?
Metropolitan cities are the main lucrative places for people to live in these days because cities provide a plethora of facilities like as shopping malls, big cinemas, education organisations and parks. However, overpopulation in urban areas can put atrocious effect on people's lifes.
To begin with, fast-paced and hectic ambience in metropolitan cities can lead to emergence of mental illnesses and depression. Commuting to offices and standing in line tend to leave people feeling antsy.For instance, according to statistics the risk of developing psychosis is 77% higher in urban than rural dwellers.Epidemiological studies have identified a large number of factors.Some of these highlight potential problems in the built environment, such as reduced access to green spaces and high levels of noise and air pollution. Since metropolitan cities are overcrowded and basic facilities are not available for everyone, it could lead to slums in cities,for instance, metropolises like Mumbai have a lot of slums because of low availability of houses.
In my opinion, the ministry should start investing in the smaller cities and start building the same facilities as well. It will put the superb effect on peoples' choice to live in smaller cities rather than big places, could fix the problem of overpopulation. It will put the impact of pollution and will improve the quality of air in big cities.
Living in big urban areas is not extraordinary because of many problems and the government should discourage people to live in metropolitan cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37037037037 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22219857141 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559670781893 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2528798048 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319863562958 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12835962644 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111059076249 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218017715203 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886899010324 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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