Many students start looking for jobs as soon as they graduate.
Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?
Many people choose to commence their job search right after the graduation. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. This essay will first demonstrate that the earlier someone starts to look for an employment, the more likely they are to land in a desired role and to achieve sufficient level of income, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, namely skipping the opportunity to take a break, is not valid.
The main reason to embark on a job hunt right after finishing the university is that such a strategy gives more time for trials and errors. That is to say that these students will have far more interviews, or maybe even internships, which are as important as good education. For example, in investment banking postgraduates with an apprenticeship experience in the industry are allowed to skip the first round of interviews. Another crucial thing to consider is seasonality of the job market, very conveniently coinciding with the end of the university term, as some employees prefer to switch places during the summer period. In other words, when candidates approach future employers who are in need to replace certain roles, they might be able to secure better remuneration packages. According to the recent UK Government poll, compensation offers made in July were 5% higher than in December.
Those opposed to this say that jumping straight into the adult life leads to impulsive choices, subsequently lowering job satisfaction on a longer horizon. However, there is actually no evidence to support this view and early career starters seem to be equally content to those who delayed the decision. It is well known that Steve Job’s work on Ipone kicked off during the higher education term, and there is no better testament to his professional fulfilment than the success of the Apple franchise.
On balance, the fact that timed transition from education into profession leads to attractive positions and higher salaries clearly outweighs the flawed argument that the absence of summer holiday is detrimental to choosing mindfully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, look, may, so, well, for example, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18823529412 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83260795382 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2842827616 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.692307692 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18735096518 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572886494396 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509783791684 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097696843269 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728820666015 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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