In some countries today, many people decide to have their first child when they are older. What are the reasons? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, it is becoming more and more common for many people decide to have their first child when they are older. For many people, especially successful people, they prefer to have children when they are older, while many people think that getting pregnant as early as possible. Personally, I prefer the former over the latter. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discusss some of the reasons why many people decide to have their first child when they are older is so popular and some of the challenges to be overcome.
Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of having your first child at an older age. One of the main positives of having children later is that it develops their career better. What I mean by this is that it creates opportunities for themselves and better for the future job. This can make you more rounded as a person.
Besides, having kids requires a myriad off knowledge and it requires parents to take time to prepare better upbringing conditions. In addition, have more time to learn to be a good parent and great education with stable economy.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to parental health that everyone should consider. There are several negative effects on women's health that can lead to several health complications. After the age of thirty, women will have difficulty giving birth. In addition, having children late will affect mother and child’s health.
All things considered, many people decide to have their first child when they are older is never easy. Personally, I believe the benefits in terms of personal growth eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, so, while, i mean, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91901408451 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49272647531 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2771491385 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1764705882 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481961235939 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12285622084 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132526673035 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223143435844 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164375659063 0.056905535591 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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