Topic: In some countries today, many people decide to have their first child when they are older. What are the reasons? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, many people have a tendency to give birth at a later stage in life in certain countries. This can be attributed to a host of reasons, and I am convinced that the advantages of this development pale in comparison with its disadvantages.
One major ground behind the rising popularity of delaying parenthood is today young people are destined to wholeheartedly devote themselves to pursuing their career path. In fact, in the era of cutting-edge technology, there are various jobs available in hubs in big cities, which are promised salaries as well as create opportunities for them to grow. This will be a solid foundation for them to land a sufficient job, and stable income to support their families in a competitive labor market. In addition, living in a modern society, several concepts have changed, thereby influencing the viewpoints of people. These days, people pay much attention to personal achievements, and constantly set goals for themselves. As a result, they might postpone having children before accomplishing their ambitions.
On the flip side, the trend toward deferred childbearing does more harm than good. The first disadvantage is that this decision might be associated with potential health risks since giving birth at more maternal age. The more later they have children, the more fertility issues they have to confront during their pregnancy, and an increased risk of genetic disorders in their children. This is compounded by the fact that the energy and stamina required for raising children may be compromised in older parents, affecting their ability to provide adequate care. Furthermore, postponing parenthood would inadvertently create a significant gap between the two generations, making it difficult for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring, thereby adversely affecting the family bond.
In conclusion, although concentrating on developing a personal career is crucial, I am convinced that the drawbacks of this trend are outweighed, including posing a threat related to health as well as the challenges in raising their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06959581901 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620060790274 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3047827944 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186640797496 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595688905667 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386608284215 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104315572341 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345130806266 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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