maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions. to what extend do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, majority of people who believe that publuc spot such as library should be never improve by government funds. while, the invention of the technology has changed the lifestyle of people. i strongly agree with idea that balance public libraries is a waste of money, i believe that as against replace are just as important.
on one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of visiting regular library considerably outweigh its disadvantages. firstly, as student who also like to go library in daily routine because they have opportunity that more focus on study and complete the presentation through books. moreover, who people fond of reading the different types of books in everyday it is better place, with environment of library is very peaceful as well as relaxing surroundings. besides this, from there individual ease get issued the books and take to them at home for one week, with more opportunity for community that they read the books about a variety of culture, tradition and history and collect the valuable information which very helpful for their life.
on the other hand it is also possible to make the opposing case. it is often argued that the infect in modern era people want to easy methods for studying because they feel pressure more about school or titution work for this reason they feel go to library just waste of time and money. secondly, most of people prefer to go computer cafe as compared to library because from there, they ease to search the study materials through online websites are just as seconds. futhermore, in golden era technology is very affordable and advance.
in conclusion, i opine that improving the public spot rather than government should that progress the other development for community or own country, however, it is truth that in recent years most of the student prefer to go to library than titution or others places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57935765986 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8813975406 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132378732313 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527293411592 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575736280518 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879635503692 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565521973004 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.