The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, crimes, accidents, famines
Why do you think that is?
Do you think the news should be balanced with both good and bad news?
Most channels consider showing disturbing side around the globe. Why does modern society think that.? A good deal of news channels reports considers showing a Goa side of most countries and limited reports that are actually good for people to enjoy. News channels were introduced to entertain people and show what's going on around the world. However, this generation, news channels are only focusing on the violence situation in which many adolescents have a bad impact on the world.
In my point of view, it is absurd to show only one side of the story, it is true that many countries have been trapped with wars and crimes. For this reason, many individuals become sentimental towards these type of news and people are being less entertained to watch news channels or read newspapers.
Elder people think that it is irrefutable to show related to crimes and wars on TV, to have knowledge about what's going on in the world. On the other hand, teenagers are scared to hang out because they have imagined the horror of the crime stories and accidents in their country and consider to be homeschooled instead. For instance, in Pakistan, many children are horrified to visit their own country because they were seeing a bad side of their country. In addition, many columnists have been said that “ Pakistan is the most beautiful and marvelous country, with all natural greenery and delicious food”
In conclusion, news channels, radios, and newspapers have to balance the good side of the world as well as, the bad side. This way many people will enjoy, have a piece of knowledge and consider explore minor areas and islands rather than being terrified and scared to visit them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93639575972 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47762401998 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530035335689 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3428714244 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.416666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204519568768 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775904016672 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561033804621 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136530326687 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480550750592 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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