In the contemporary day and time, there is a war of words regarding saving animals from becoming extinct. An equal number of people opines in favor of the very notion, while others are hesitant to it.
The following paragraphs would cast light on my personal perspective with apt examples. In the first paragraph, I will explain why animals are important for ecological balance, and in the second paragraph, I will analyze what other problems need our attention.
To begin with, animals play a very prominent role in maintaining the balance between human beings and nature. These species are part of our food chain, if there is any disturbance that is caused then, there is a chance that the life of human beings is in danger. For example, if honey bees do not carry a pollination process then there is no way that plants can produce food. Moreover, certain countries
On the other hand, there are various important issues such as environmental pollution, lack of education for the poor. Pollution is rapidly increasing and if we don't prevent it, the ozone layer depletes completely infrared rays directly reach earth and people will suffer from severe health problems. In addition to that, people don't maintain cleanliness in their surroundings and there is a discharge of effluents into the water bodies from industries, factories which is responsible for several water-borne diseases. Government should spend money on solving these issues. For example, our prime minister Narendra Modi started Swatch Bharat Abyan which helped in cleaning 60% of our country. These kinds of activities make our country a safer place to live.
Taking everything into account, I personally feel that saving animals is important to our countries but we have more serious issues that we should spend money on like pollution and maintaining hygienic surroundings because if we live longer then there will be a chance that we can protect other creatures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, while, for example, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1167192429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69498131722 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615141955836 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9899545688 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223679352243 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684771558965 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052307901663 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120413009528 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467864366361 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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