Many believe that modern technology has given us more leisure time than before while others say the opposite discuss both views and then give your own opinion.
Modern technology plays a vital role in people's spare time. Many believe that advanced technology gives us more free time than ever before. On the flip side, some say people's leisure time has been shrinking as a result of the tremendous advancing technology. The present essay seeks to discuss that the advantages of modern technology outweigh its disadvantages.
It is often suggested that modern technology brings us more free time for two main reasons. For one thing, modern kitchen appliances allow us to program them and decrease the time that we used to spend in our kitchen before. For instance, just like commercials on television and advertisements in magazines, new solar ovens can cook many recipes better and faster than before. Another thing is that new vehicle allows humans to travel faster and safer. As an illustration, today people can teleport from one part of the world to another part in just a few hours.
Although much of modern technology in our everyday lives has only positive effects, some uses bring controversial issues and questions. In the first place, millions of people listen to the news by their cellphones to keep abreast of the latest news about national and international events. An example may help clarify the point. In many developed countries, employers do not allow to use their cellphones during work time. In the second place, smartphones which have numerous interesting applications on it waste children's time inside and outside of school much more than we think they do. As things stand right now, modern technology may put the integrity of the family at risk.
By comparing and contrasting the positive and negative aspects of the influence of modern technology on our leisure time, I believe that its upside is significantly more crucial than its downside. To support my position, I would like to offer two primary arguments. Firstly, Doctor Steven, the well-versed head of the medical department of Sidney University, asserts that unarguably, improvement in people's living standards owes much to modern technology which entails too much free time and relaxes minds. Phones and emails bring us the opportunity of communicating with our friends and relatives who live in different parts of the globe instead of waiting weeks to receive a letter from them. Secondly, as has been frequently demonstrated, modern technology brings us a door to a new world, and we need to learn ways of using it in the best way. In other words, we need to take the initiative and begin to make an about-face in better use of the spare time which modern technology brings to us.
Based on the above, it can be stated that modern technology brings us more leisure time than ever before. Nevertheless, the question is: Can advance technology improve the health and happiness of human beings in general? Only time will tell, but in the meantime, science and technology continue to influence every aspect of our modern lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, another thing, for instance, in general, as a result, for one thing, in other words, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2468.0 1615.20841683 153% => OK
No of words: 489.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04703476483 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75100002499 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535787321063 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 780.3 506.74238477 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0972515148 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.833333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281005532707 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859467819508 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792684503741 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179311440405 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730864531192 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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