People have contentious thoughts about the pros and cons of living in a spacious block. In this essay I will discuss both stand points, and vividly explain why living in large apartment outweighs the demerits.
An ample amount of people believes that living in a large flat will be more advantageous tends to have the following key points. First of all, exercise daily is a must to stay healthy. Doing so needs a lot of space to do different routines and sometimes specific training requires equipment. Secondly, people are optimistic that a family will grow in the near future, thus, excess space will somehow prevent inhabitants from being restrained on the things they can do.
On the other hands, there are certain weakness on living in a large apartment. To start with, logically vast residences is way more expensive than the common ones, particularly in strategic places like cities or places that has a lot of amusement and commercial establishments. Moreover, living in a large apartment means lowering you privacy. Lets take for example new born babies, infants on the early days needed extreme catering and could be awake during deep nights which literally affects your sleeping. In addition, pets could also add to the challenges. Depending on what type of animal it is, problems could range from the smell or noise. For example, a fish pet could produce unpleasant fragrance when doing water change, whereas, dogs could bark all day and night.
To conclude, apartments which is larger provides convenience and worry free from family expansion. In contrast, earning a big space apartment rent is luxurious and more likely giving away your privacy. Thus, in my opinion living in a large apartment outwit its disadvantages since.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, in addition, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10104529617 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66361208989 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665505226481 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5766893072 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266046201672 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736775256163 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489749895744 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15070523356 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298353960267 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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