In many countries, art galleries' visitors have been declining steadily. What are the possible reasons? How to change this trend?
In this day and age, multiple nations have recorded a decline in visitors to art galleries. This problem can result from a hectic lifestyle and interests in other fields. Therefore, governments should be involved in tackling this current situation.
First and foremost, the majority of people find it difficult to visit art galleries. In recent days, individuals deal with the imbalance between work and personal time, so they begin to underrate and overlook their interest in art. Consequently, the exhibitions significantly decrease in almost all the developed territories. Furthermore, residents are keen on other fields such as technology. It is believed that inhabitants with artistic minds can appreciate the beauty or see the artist's messages behind the work of art. Conversely, if they are unable to consume the art, they, for example, will see paintings as inappropriate and meaningless drawings.
To solve this issue, the authorities should take immediate action. The first solution is to adjust the school curriculums to encourage students to pay attention to art lessons as a major subject. To be more specific, educational institutions can organize trips to exhibitions to introduce multiple well-known drawings to students. Another solution is to sponsor a large amount of money to build the art displays in faraway areas with lower entrance tickets or free guides and simultaneously design the building with various styles, thereby reducing the monotonous atmosphere in these places.
In conclusion, the decrease in the number of visitors to art galleries may stem from a lack of time and taste. As a result, some solutions such as adjusting the lessons and sponsoring the construction of more displays should be implemented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44117647059 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06467730313 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7102653481 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137371865944 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460125637346 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586405161872 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901935059458 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518868008911 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.