In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?
In this day and age, children are employed to do different kind of full time and part time jobs in certain countries. Many people believe that this is obviously incorrect idea, whereas others argue that it will be essential for getting work experience, supporting education and enhancing responsible attitude. Both views are examined before reaching a concrete decision.
Personally speaking, children should be received pleasant support from their family especially primary education, so that child may have exposed to fundamental subject like Mathematics, Literature and Society. Hence they will have sufficient source and a certain overlook to choose what they really want to focus and develop in their career path. This will create a well-knowledge labor generation which is beneficial for country in long term strategies. If the children were not educated and engaged in paid work first results in lack of knowledge seriously to build sophisticated businesses along with modern technical major. Furthermore, children are deserved to take part in some recreation activities to have pure childhood time without burden of money.
However, some people claim that why you go to school and university when your parent can not afford it? Maybe in this circumstance, above claim is quite suitable, to some extent. It will be less cost and more efficient if you start some manual work from child days. They might learn practical experiences and become expert in reality job, thus, without doubt, they will be a great personality. Additionally, their work will give them chances to endure obstacles as well as trouble which life throws on them, this let them be more responsible and respectful to value of money. Nevertheless, as we know that children are the most vulnerable people in society because they don’t have enough self-protected ability in front of bad behavior toward them, hence they may be overused by employees.
In conclusion, it is not possible to judge a child and their family who take part in paid work because it depends on their certain situation. It is rewarding when offering children a basic curriculum in country by their parent’s best attempt along with providing some kind of jobs in control to advance their practical skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...en are employed to do different kind of full time and part time jobs in certain countries...
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Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...d to do different kind of full time and part time jobs in certain countries. Many people ...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ke Mathematics, Literature and Society. Hence they will have sufficient source and a ...
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Line 5, column 791, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence they may be overused by employees. In conclusion, it is not possible to jud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25690607735 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78995815158 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599447513812 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6043436146 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.9375 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272086139327 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816898273987 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480082887443 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158797753464 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251566417495 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.