In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
What are your opinions on this?
In today’s fast-changing world, children are participating in various paid work activities. The child employment issue is considered controversial because of the varying opinions of different people. One side believes that this is a fundamental way for children to gain work experience at an early stage. At the same time, many believe that this practice will take a toll on offspring in studying.
On the one hand, people are often prone to pursue higher education in foreign countries. Most of them belong to poor families, and it is almost impossible for them to maintain their studies without part-time jobs. Consequently, this is not only indispensable for their expenses, they can also gain a myriad of experience in their future employment, which will help them to get high-paid job opportunities. This is also beneficial to enhance their mindset and hone their skills so they can take responsibility at the early stage of their careers.
On the other hand, in most underdeveloped countries, parents can not afford the study and other expenditures. Hence, in some families, parents drive their children out of studying , since they believe that the children have to take responsibility for several basic necessities of life. However, this mindset which proliferates widely in society leads them to become illiterate. Moreover, a paid job in an early stage is also a bad practice because in this age students should have enjoyed leading the most care-free life, playing and reveling around unaware of the struggles of life. To avoid these situations, the government should take more care so they can maintain their academic growth to compete in the modern world.
In conclusion, part-time jobs are beneficial for several students to help them in managing their livelihood along with gaining relevant expertise according to their studies. Meanwhile, it is harmful to those children who are partaking in different kinds of jobs as they are alleviated in studying and individual health.
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Suggestion: necessities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29559748428 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96022047131 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544025157233 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7702999135 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.266666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208602295255 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717596766401 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479111818813 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12868393665 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719619825322 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.