Many countries have most shops and product as the same.Consider it is a positive development, whereas other consider it is a negative development.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is undeniable to state that owing to globalisation import and export is possible from one country to another.Most of the Nations have variety of shops and items as the similar.I personally agree with the former view as it is a convenient way for buyer to buy international brands and there will no shortage of products. To commence with former view,discrimination will decrease.When all international products will available in all countries, they can buy easily owing to which they can become equal.To exemplify,due to advancement in technology they can buy products equally on Amazon browser that are famous in other countries.In addition to this,business relation will incline with foreign countries.If all brands of other resions will available in poor countries,it will help to boost their economy. Eventually,Booming economy upsurge the development of weak countries.
Moving further,it is a convenient way for purchaser to purchase distinct variety of things.As all international items are easily bought by individuals,they can save their quality time.Consequently,they can use this time for other purpose.Moreover,due to worldwide trade there is no shortage of products.Eminent brands are reached at nearby shops and it is not arduous to buy these items.To epitome, prominent brand like Gucci and Addidas available in nearby places. So,how it is a negative development if there is no shortage of items.
now discussing latter view,diversity is disappearing in designs.Similar designs will found in different countries so people will have similar style.To cite an example,now days most of people buy addidas shoes which are similar design.What is more,there is big loss in local business. There are multifarious local brands are available in native country but individuals like to use foreign product which are inexpensive.As a result,local shops got closed and people went jobless.
To recapitulate, undoubtedly, worldwide business provided variety of items to folks.Although diversity is disappearing in design,yet it is a convenient for buyer to buy variety of products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, in addition, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64649681529 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68393156546 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535031847134 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.420913446 49.4020404114 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.625 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.25 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103648108634 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598466467557 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374263046729 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560015793139 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336670044974 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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