In many countries insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reason for this? What problems might this cause in society?
Showing respect to elder people has always been a highly-encouraged behavior. However, in today’s world, it seems that young citizens are not paying enough effort to achieve this. Many reasons have been given for this negative trend, and some of them are considered the most reasonable.
In the past, family members communicating with each other is a part of their daily life. They used to tell stories, share their thoughts, and have fun together. Yet, when the world is growing and developing continually, adults have to spend more of their time busy with works. As a result, they fail to teach their children about family bonds and value. They leave their kids alone with technology, and technology is not always a good teacher. Because of the lack of proper teaching from grown-ups, many youngsters simply could not realize the importance of being respectful to elderlies.
As noted previously, technology might either be wonderful or terrible for a child. Of course, many sources on the Internet are completely useful and efficient, but not all of them. Some websites contain false information and knowledge about the outside world and lead our children to mistakes. On some social networks, where some teenagers spend most of their time, improper words and useless entertaining are everywhere. They consider everybody as their "friends" and deny the action of showing respect to older citizens. Consequently, younger people will act as ‘copy cats’, and respectfulness will soon be forgotten.
Although this is a serious problem, some resolutions can still be done to lessen it. Adults, especially those with children, should organize their timetables in a wiser way and spend more of their time with children other than leaving them with modern technology. If they succeed in teaching their kids how to behave, then this trend would no longer be an issue in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, still, then, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19934640523 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83639987538 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.741173724 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3888888889 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144786464602 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476681236878 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494957496407 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988639332833 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498463956429 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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