Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Every people in their life would face the dilemma of situations in which they must accept what happens or try to make things better. Some believe that acceptance is the optimal approach, I agree that we should strive to better these situations.
On one hand, it could be argued that people should be satisfied with what life brings to them. Many believe that change is too risky and requires massive effort. By accepting unfavorable situations, people may have a better sense of security, and this, psychologically, somehow could increase their happiness. For example, if one looks for a new job, there is no way to prove that it would offer him or her more satisfaction. Moreover, in some serious cases, such as wars, diseases, or economic downturns, it would be hazardous and virtually impossible for an individual to improve the situation.
However, I side with those who think that we should do our best to move up in life. First, those who strongly believe that there are always ways to better their life are the ones who create the advancement of human civilization. Otherwise, great inventions like electricity, the Internet and technology could have never come to life. What’s more, not by simply accepting problems can people discover their abilities, their skills and improve them. Famous and successful humans like athletes, politicians, or scientists achieve stunning success thanks to their never give up mindset and continued effort. Therefore, I believe that trying to better unfavorable situations should be rewarded.
To sum up, although making changes could be dangerous in rare cases, in vast majority of instances, this action can bring about great success and help people to identify their potential and live their life a more meaningful way. On balance, I believe that striving to change unsatisfied situations is a better approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16556291391 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7609858473 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1742869673 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142221810807 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474557516832 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326902893438 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943855832168 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245565104874 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.