In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects.
Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Tourism plays a vital role in the growth of any economy. Some people believe that the international tourism is an important source of income while others do not. Is it really such disadvantageous? This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of international tourism and provide evidence as to why it is more advantageous to promote global tourism.
To begin with, there are many reasons why tourism has more advantages than disadvantages. Firstly, international tourism comes with many job opportunities in various sectors like hotels, airlines and restaurants. Secondly, it will boost the economy of a particular country; strengthening various industries in a cascading effect . For example, the more outsiders will visit the country, the more money country will have. In addition, they will spend more money because people travel country to country and they love to explore new things which gives more chance that they will put in. Lastly, it will help the country to grow faster than usual. For instance, to approach the toruists, government has to build a strong infrastructure so that it can handle a large number of tourists at a given time.
However, international tourism also has some disadvantages like constructing a large infrastructure to hold a large amount of traffic which will cause of pollution.Moreover, air, noise and water pollution are the downside of over tourism. Furthermore, it will also cause of destruction of nature and habitat loss of many species can also be attributed to over tourism.
In conclusion, although international tourism is an important aspect to boost the economy, but it is also has some major disadvantages of nature and culture which needs to be addressed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, lastly, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29454545455 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16282558142 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7792160749 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2142857143 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309917981 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108310235627 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732963910434 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204782685775 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696607519304 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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