In many countries more and more people buy a wider range of household goods like a TV set, microwave oven. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
More and more people purchase large-scale of household items such as TV set and microwave oven in several nations. Personally, I would convey that this calls forth more significant advantages which I will explicate in the ensuing paragraph.
Looking from the beneficial sides, we can see that if several individuals owned domestic items, it would assist them to feel more convenience at home, especially for workaholics. This is based on modern societies who have begun home-cooking not only for obtaining relaxation but also for keeping healthy. Most homeowners purchasing kitchen sets may bring greater chances of cooking new recipes to meet their contentment. Moreover, another aspect is that producers attempt marketing their products to target plenteous customers. When inhabitants purchase products supporting their household activities, this would make the company focus on quality based on customer satisfaction. SAMSUNG 98” QLED TV is a well-known electronic item as a main selling target having been identified by the marketing division.
By contrast, there are downsides of this issue that we must find out, first, how this issue causes addiction to electronic goods. Apparently, such devices may neglect the advantages from activity requiring physical activities. Rice cooker, for instance, creates people to pass over majorities from cooking rice manually, more prioritizing healthy sides to avoid long-term diseases because of electronic device addiction. In addition, many suppliers provide facilities to credit access in which consumers can possibly be saddled with debts. This happens because inhabitants desire to purchase luxury furniture quickly. It appears that IKEA, the world’s largest furniture retailer, offers fast funding marketing strategies to customers in order to meet household needs.
Overall, while the issue appears unfavourable to some extent, I would dispute that the remarkable benefits would create more enjoyment in their house and the shop owners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76351351351 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84823545647 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682432432432 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.433899228 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179603588902 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567830260833 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773573291449 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124814232936 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983672845643 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.