In many countries, more and more young people are unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? What can be done to cope with this problem?
It is being discussed that a rising number of young adults cannot find jobs after graduating from school. This is essay will provide several consequent bad effects, then followed by solutions.
To begin with, youth unemployment may result in serious influences on the young themselves. It is obvious that youngsters, without any job, cannot make a living on their own for occupations are the only source of independent adults’ income. To make matters worse, the young adults may feel depressed if they cannot be employed. Children are educated to survive in the harsh world. If these young people cannot survive the job market, this means that they are meaningless, which can lead them to be frustrated. For another, what the young unemployment brings to the society is the increase in the crime rate. These unemployed people cornered by the livelihood can do anything illegal, including theft or robbery. As a result, there may be more stealing and robbery in the current society.
In order to deal with this problem, two effective ways are indispensable. One is that the government ought to create more job opportunities. With an increasing number of employment chances, the young adults may easily be employed. The other is that the government should provide more career training for the unemployed youths. Another possible reason why the young cannot find jobs is that they may lack employable skills. Through vocational training, they may be more likely to be qualified at work.
In short, unemployment in the youth might conceivably give rise to poor individuals, who may commit crimes when they face survival difficulties. Two measures are supposed to be proposed to tackle this serious issue.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, in short, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19133574007 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80852968968 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5215353267 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8888888889 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293644349331 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873968449845 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419271322837 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161395585496 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629260623274 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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