In many countries, more and more young people are unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? What can be done to cope with this problem?
Most of the graduates are jobless , which becomes serious matter these days . there are number of problems which individual as well as society is facing going to unemployment
Undoubtedly , people spend lot of money on the children's education , but even after graduation they do not get jobs , which lead to numerous problems . Firstly , adolescents undergoes depression because of lack of money . In order to fulfill their basic necessities , they indulge in wrong activities . these activities various from taking drugs to robbery and many more. Lastly , nott only on youth unemployment has bad effect on society also . people now start taking education for granted because they think that education is useless without jobs .
However , every problem comes with a solution . there are are number of ways by which we can get rid from unemployment . authorities should open new jobs for youngsters . In addition , retirement age of elderly people should be decreased from 60 to 50 so that young aspirants can get more job opportunities . Last but not the least youngsters should also try their luck in private sector . For instance , a boy in my neighborhood was trying his luck in public sector job but unfortunately he finally got job in private sector . now he is earning well.
To recapitulate , youth unemployment can be only combat with joint efforts of youth , society and authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, lastly, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18018018018 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88388778871 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.878661852 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699465465751 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678450929433 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148601944395 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309797158559 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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